1) The primary colors Zach makes use of in his third composition allow for an eye popping result. The bright yellow, strawberry red and hints of blue really allow the colors to jump off the page in a way that directs all attention on these colors.
2) Zack's handling of monochromatic coloring results in a weak composition visually. The use of dark, navy blue on black prevents the viewer from fully understanding what they're seeing. Almost the whole image is entirely dark.
3) There isn't much linking these compositions together from page to page. The inclusion of similar subjects like a bulging and house, or two suitcases, might be the most blatant suggestions of continuity, but other than that, each composition stands independently from it's neighbor. In terms of flow, the idea of disorder in campus living comes through, but even that feels muddled.
1. I liked the piece in front of your frat house where you use analagous colors, it gives the piece a cool look, and there are enough shades of the colors that you can distinguish more shapes. From the shades of colors chosen, i would say that the picture was taken late at night.
2. I think your first piece-in your dorm room- is aesthetically pleasing and interesting to look at, I think that just using two colors hindered the effect, making it seem a little more basic, i think it would benefit from a few more shapes and shades.
3. While I dont see a blatant linear path, I think your pieces flow form one piece to the other because they are unified and cohesive enough.
1) The primary colors Zach makes use of in his third composition allow for an eye popping result. The bright yellow, strawberry red and hints of blue really allow the colors to jump off the page in a way that directs all attention on these colors.
ReplyDelete2) Zack's handling of monochromatic coloring results in a weak composition visually. The use of dark, navy blue on black prevents the viewer from fully understanding what they're seeing. Almost the whole image is entirely dark.
3) There isn't much linking these compositions together from page to page. The inclusion of similar subjects like a bulging and house, or two suitcases, might be the most blatant suggestions of continuity, but other than that, each composition stands independently from it's neighbor. In terms of flow, the idea of disorder in campus living comes through, but even that feels muddled.
1. I liked the piece in front of your frat house where you use analagous colors, it gives the piece a cool look, and there are enough shades of the colors that you can distinguish more shapes. From the shades of colors chosen, i would say that the picture was taken late at night.
ReplyDelete2. I think your first piece-in your dorm room- is aesthetically pleasing and interesting to look at, I think that just using two colors hindered the effect, making it seem a little more basic, i think it would benefit from a few more shapes and shades.
3. While I dont see a blatant linear path, I think your pieces flow form one piece to the other because they are unified and cohesive enough.